Kia ora Melnina! Ka pai posting onto your blog, I like that you have chosen an acrostic poem to share. Next time it would be great if you could use more than one word for each letter and try not to repeat the same words. Keep up the blogging! NJ
Hello NJ thank you for commenting on my blog post I will try not to repeat the words because this was really hard for me to do I couldn't think of any words so my sister helped me. Blog you later Melnina
Great thinking to ask your sister to help you. This was quite a long acrostic poem, you may like to try another one with fewer lines. Keep up the great blogging Melnina!
Kia Ora, my name is Helen. I really like your acrostic poem about "Resourceful". I also like the way that you put so many nice words. I remember doing something similar to this but it was a limerick. Next time you could put a description about this. Did you enjoy this? Was it hard?
Thanks for sharing your learning. You can go to my blog by Clicking here Blog you later, Helen.
Hi, Alan here. I really liked your post about your acrostic poem. I liked how you didn't use the same meaning twice. If you do this another time I think you should add sentences with your words. Blog you later alan
Hi Melina it's William from R7. I think your Acrostic Poem about Resourceful is brilliant. I remember doing an Acrostic Poem for The Boy in the Girl's Bathroom last term. What was your favourite part while making this? Maybe you could try and do a different word and make another Acrostic poem. Blog you later!
Hello William thanks for commenting on my blog post it is very nice of you I didn't have a favourite part because this was very hard to do. Blog ya later
Kia ora Melnina!
ReplyDeleteKa pai posting onto your blog, I like that you have chosen an acrostic poem to share. Next time it would be great if you could use more than one word for each letter and try not to repeat the same words.
Keep up the blogging!
NJ
Hello NJ thank you for commenting on my blog post I will try not to repeat the words because this was really hard for me to do I couldn't think of any words so my sister helped me.
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Melnina
Great thinking to ask your sister to help you. This was quite a long acrostic poem, you may like to try another one with fewer lines. Keep up the great blogging Melnina!
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ReplyDeleteKia Ora, my name is Helen. I really like your acrostic poem about "Resourceful". I also like the way that you put so many nice words. I remember doing something similar to this but it was a limerick. Next time you could put a description about this. Did you enjoy this? Was it hard?
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing your learning. You can go to my blog by Clicking here
Blog you later,
Helen.
Hello Helen thanks for commenting on my blog post it is very nice of you I enjoyed it a little and it was very hard for me.
DeleteHi, Alan here.
ReplyDeleteI really liked your post about your acrostic poem. I liked how you didn't use the same meaning twice. If you do this another time I think you should add sentences with your words.
Blog you later alan
HI Alan thanks for commenting on my blog post it is very nice of you Next time I will add sentences.
DeleteHi Melina it's William from R7.
ReplyDeleteI think your Acrostic Poem about Resourceful is brilliant. I remember doing an Acrostic Poem for The Boy in the Girl's Bathroom last term. What was your favourite part while making this? Maybe you could try and do a different word and make another Acrostic poem.
Blog you later!
Hello William thanks for commenting on my blog post it is very nice of you I didn't have a favourite part because this was very hard to do.
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HI Melenina Ana from Room 8.I really like your blog post about Acrostic Poem I really like the words you used in you blog post. Blog you later.
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