Kia Ora, my name is Yusuf and I’m from Room 7 at Owairaka District School. I really liked your blog post about your adventure . Have you ever tried describing what the wolf looked like?
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Hi, My name is Alodia from Room 8. Your post was very interesting. I have a few questions. 1. They were in the forest, and you said that there was no more oxygen. Forests have lots of trees, right? Just cause you didn't know, trees produce oxygen. So how come there was no more oxygen? Are the trees dead or something, or sick?
2. It said that there was no more oxygen. Both of the friends were happy that the scary experience was over. If there was no oxygen, why would they be happy?
3. If there was no more oxygen, they would be dead.
4. You made some grammar mistakes. Make sure you check your work before posting. (Hardly any full-stops!) If you want to visit my blog come here. https://odsalodiake.blogspot.com/ From your very confused commenter... 🐢🐁Alodia🐁🐢
Kia Ora, my name is Lila and I’m from Room 7 at Owairaka District School. I really liked your blog post about the adventure. I remember when I did something like this last term. Have you ever tried writing about the wolf?
Thanks for sharing your learning. You should check out my blog https://odslila.blogspot.com/
great work loved how you have putted the pictures there to describe the wolf and the two BFFS in the woods keep it up.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora, my name is Yusuf and I’m from Room 7 at Owairaka District School. I really liked your blog post about your adventure . Have you ever tried describing what the wolf looked like?
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing your learning. You should check out my blog
(https://odsshiekal.blogspot.com/)
Blog you later,
(Yusuf)
Hi Yusuf I will try and do that
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ReplyDeleteMy name is Alodia from Room 8. Your post was very interesting. I have a few questions.
1. They were in the forest, and you said that there was no more oxygen. Forests have lots of trees, right? Just cause you didn't know, trees produce oxygen. So how come there was no more oxygen? Are the trees dead or something, or sick?
2. It said that there was no more oxygen. Both of the friends were happy that the scary experience was over. If there was no oxygen, why would they be happy?
3. If there was no more oxygen, they would be dead.
4. You made some grammar mistakes. Make sure you check your work before posting. (Hardly any full-stops!)
If you want to visit my blog come here. https://odsalodiake.blogspot.com/
From your very confused commenter...
🐢🐁Alodia🐁🐢
I am very confused
DeleteKia Ora, my name is Lila and I’m from Room 7 at Owairaka District School. I really liked your blog post about the adventure. I remember when I did something like this last term. Have you ever tried writing about the wolf?
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing your learning. You should check out my blog https://odslila.blogspot.com/
Blog you later,Lila
Hi Lila I will try and do that
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