Tuesday, 10 November 2020

My Poem About Winter

 Winter

Thunder rumbles through the gloomy dark  clouds

As bright lighting strikes the ancient thick tree

Rain splatters on the rusty tin roof

Spines shiver in the freezing coldness

Winter


4 comments:

  1. Kia ora Melnina. What a great poem! You've used some awesome descriptive language. What inspired you to write this poem? Maybe you could read your poem and add the audio to your blog.

    ReplyDelete
  2. Hi Melnina, Matilda here from Room 7.
    Your post is great. I especially liked how you highlighted the letters. you reminded me of the time I did this. Maybe next time you could write more about it.
    Bye, Matilda.

    ReplyDelete
  3. Hi me Lincoln from 24. Hey hey hey i like your post about winter i like how use used the word thick !!! the word thick means chunky hard that is the word thick means. But so sad for the ancient thick thick very thick i love the word thick but the ancient thick tree. Bye hope you like my statment of the word thick

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. hi lincoln thanks for commenting on my blog post. Thank you for your very weird statement of thick.

      Delete

Note: only a member of this blog may post a comment.